Everyone like games,don't They?By playing games children learn new things and have enjoyable time.Games are important because they make children keep their minds sharp,learn new things and
besides maintain social skills.Games have a lot of important point such as learninig new things,having enjoyable time and learninig control and following the rules.
First important point is learninig new things.You should learn new important knowladge.These are
necessary for future life.Because;games develops your thinking and strategic abilities.Also by playing
,children learn a lot about co-operation,discipline,team work and respect to others.
The other important point is that playing games is enjoyable.Not only children but also adults need to forget about the problem of the real world.Games provide everybody a new view of live.
Lastly important point is learning control and following the rules.Children learn how to behave
,control and follow the rules from the games.If they get used to the rules various games in such
an early age they will have not problems in future life ,and therefore,adapt quickly an more afficiently
to all of the factors in the life.
In conculusion,I can say that games are important everyone.They can help you keep your mind alert,learn new things.
özgür your essay is really good. you have a successful organisation.
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however,
your content could be richer. this means, you can write more in your paragraphs. you can give examples or give statistics. giving statistics is an easy way to enrich your body paragraphs. how enjoyable are the games?
ın your 3. body paragraph, you can talk about discipline maybe, not in the 1st one.
your introduction should have opposing ideas. for example you can say: some people think that games are harmful for children.
your thesis statement could be:
although some people believe that games are a waste of time for children, I believe games are very useful for children and have a lot of advantages such as learninig new things,having enjoyable time and learninig control and following the rules.
your conclusion could be richer too. you only talked about one point. but you should say: they can help you keep your mind alert, learn new things, have enjoyable time and learn about control.
Thank you for your commet....I understand you say:)
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