20 Mart 2012 Salı

The Effects of Alcoholism

                                              
      How many times have you heard about the conseguence of alcoholism?Alcoholism is one of the
major prolems in society.The effects of this disease are really serious.Many people used to drink
alcohol and they have a lot of problem.The effects of Alcoholism are physical,psychological and
economic.
      The first effects of Alcoholism are physical.These are most important because these can cause
your death.For example;alcoholism causes cancer in the stomach,kidneys and liver. Also, it causes
loss of appetite and depresion.If you drink alcohol,you might have a lot of physical problems.
      The second effects of alcoholism are psyhological.At the beginning,alcohol makes you feel
relaxad but if you drink it in excess, it will cause depression and anxiety.It also causes family and
legal problems.Alcohol is very powerful and alters your normal b  ehaviours.
      The third effects of alcoholism are economic.Alcohol isn't cheap.If you drink two or three times
in a week.you will 15TL it.People don'tthink about the money and spend everything when they are
drunk.
      In conculusion; the effects of alcoholism which are physical,psychological and economic can cause many problems in your life.It also can cause in problems with your family,friends and yourself.
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  1. yelda yelmer23 Mart 2012 03:04

    your introduction is successful.
    you have a successful organisation.
    you have topic sentences in your body paragraphs.

    however,

    but your thesis could be like this:

    Although some people support drinking alcohol by saying that they forget their problems, I believe drinking alcohol results in many different problems in many ways such as physical,psychological and economic.


    ın your second body paragraph, you can talk about the problems for family too.

    ın your conclusion, you can finish your essay by giving a warning such as:

    if you want to live a healthy life, if you don't want to have any psychological problems and if you don't want to waste your money, you should avoid alcohol.

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  2. Özgür Ala26 Mart 2012 09:23

    I understand what I should do....thank you..

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